[SpmnE9zero]

Originally Posted by Ender514

nice!

Hey there sunshine!

[Ender514]

Originally Posted by LeMans335xiE90

jared?

nicholas??

[Ender514]

Originally Posted by SpmnE9zero

nice!

Hey there sunshine!

my favorite sheep herder!

[SpmnE9zero]

Originally Posted by Ender514

my favorite sheep herder!

I am your only sheep herder Philly!

[LeMans335xiE90]

lmao

[Ender514]

Originally Posted by SpmnE9zero

I am your only sheep herder Philly!

bahaha!

[Ender514]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

VINTAGE BAAHAAAHA

i couldnt help it

[m3pare]

DAMN! jerry i want to buy your book, thanks.

[m3pare]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

in time my friend, in time

cool, just PM me where to paypal the money whenever it's available. or if it's available for purchase online or something.

[LeMans335xiE90]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

ill know int he next few weeks when i get a publisher

legittt??

[LeMans335xiE90]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

legit.. im just bout done.. did u ever read that shit from yesterday?

nope i took a nap then had a game and then watched raw/passed out ill check it now

[LeMans335xiE90]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

sneak peak of another chapter..


A faint glow surrounded his body as a vision of a strange place appeared in his mind. The vision was blurry for several moments, but when it cleared, Jerry discovered himself in quite an unusual place. A great amount of fog slithered thickly amongst the ground, which remained completely invisible for miles upon miles. Above a lightning storm lit this place. Mountains could be seen from every angle, more so when the sky flashed. The heavy amount of fog seemed endless.

Jerry studied his appearance. Even though he had accomplished meditating his soul to another dimension, every bit of clothing from shoes to shirt, remained intact with him. His skin texture felt different as well. It was much more firm and colder.

“We’ve been expecting you for quite some time, Jerry,” said from a figure, standing behind the confused teenager.

“Who—who or what are you?” questioned Jerry as he quickly turned around to see a tall, dark, masculine figure, which was surrounded by this green aura. “What is this place?”

“This place where your great-grandfather has advised you to meditate to is called Spiritual Judgement, and I am one of its proud Guardians. My name is Zorda” His voice was deep, and he talked slow. He appeared taller and wider than a spirit; dark shades of green in his non-transparent skin. His eyes were pitch black with thin, diamond green slits as pupils.

“Nice to meet you.” He continued eying the being in front of him, still in awe over the Guardian’s sight.

“This is the dimension where spirits are judged after death and where all other dimensions are connected. Here, spirits are judged to either remain here for the rest of their life, to roam around freely or be locked in a sphere for eternity… Or to simply be sent straight to Hell.”

“Alright, then why am I here?”

The Guardian grinned. “To learn how to destroy the being that dwells inside your mind and this is where that battle will occur.” His voice grew louder. “Let’s see how good of a fighter you are… Attack me!”

“What?” Jerry nervously questioned.

“Attack me!” His green aura brightened.

“What?” he asked again.

“Just concentrate,” replied the Guardian. “Jump forward and hit me! It’s that easy. You’re using your mind to meditate. When you do so, abilities are given to you that are normally impossible to accomplish on Earth. Try it!”

After hesitating for several moments, Jerry leaped forward, immediately popping up in front of the guardian, thrusting his right arm hard, which was blocked just as fast.

“How the hell did I do that?” inquired Jerry.

“Like I said before, you’re using your mind and what was not possible before…is now. Now block me.”

The Guardian went for a kick, but Jerry quickly blocked it with ease by the use of his right hand. He sensed another kick coming, so he quickly ducked, barely missing it. Jerry suddenly landed an explosive punch to the lower torso of the Guardian, sending him flying several feet upwards. The Guardian stopped in mid-air.

From a distance, a few other Guardians showed up, some floating in the air, others standing on the ground.

“Good, but not good enough,” said Zorda. He held out his hand, aiming it at Jerry. Small green circles of light appeared in his palm. The lights spun around, growing closer and closer until a ball of energy had formed.

“He’s not going to do what I think he is,” said Jerry, watching Zorda closely.

“Yes I am!” shouted Zorda as the energy ball fired down. The ball looked like a miniature comet with a tail of energy drifting behind it.

Running faster than he normally could, Jerry escaped the impact of the blast as it collided into the ground. Upon turning around, he saw another energy blast headed his direction. This one, however, was not avoided and directly smashed into his chest, knocking him down.

“If you cannot use your energy to shield yourself, then fly away from the attack!” shouted Zorda, forming several balls of energy this time. “I know you can do this”, he said quietly, right as he launched his energy attack forward.

Jerry quickly ran away from the blasts, each one fiercely smashing into the ground behind him. His speed kept increasing each second.

“Fly!” screamed Zorda with frustration. His energy blasts grew greater in size and fired faster. “Feel the energy grasp every inch of your body and let it carry you!”

DAMN man... and when did you change it to jerry???

[LeMans335xiE90]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

the main character has always been jerry bro.. LO

!!!!!!

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

that is part of the chapter where jerry lends to use his mind to meditate his soul to another dimension, by doing this, he can fight the spirit within him to prevent its release.

yea thats crazy man get it done..

u gonna use a different author name?

[SpmnE9zero]

I saw a clip of that before and thought it was fake! OMOGMOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMOGMOGM!!!!!!!!!

[LeMans335xiE90]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

It's always been jerry.. LOL well my real name isnt jerry, u know this!!


I could make my author name like.. GJ Gawel or JG Gawel.. something like that..


OGMOMOGMGMOGOGOG

couldve sworn it was allen or something

hahah thats fucking great

Originally Posted by SpmnE9zero

I saw a clip of that before and thought it was fake! OMOGMOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMOGMOGM!!!!!!!!!

yea saw it before too hahaah

[SpmnE9zero]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

bro that's something i'd do lol// so i putt this new girl to a test.. been talking bc we met throuhg friends, she was hitting up my cell a lot yesterday..but i started convo so i told her last ngiht "hit me up tmrw when ur around".. havent heard yet, but im also not going to start a convesation wit a new chick 2 days in a row

tell her to assume the position, if she does get rid of her after a night! If she doesn't continue talking to her!

[LeMans335xiE90]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

Ohh!!! Allen Carrington is one of the main characters from Book 2.. He's the albino australian who finds the location on earth with left over spirit energy.. he uses it to kill anyone that hurt him in his life and once he's done killing everyone, he is killed from the same energy.

ohhhh is jerry book 1?

[LeMans335xiE90]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

Book 5 is actually the middle book. What I did was the last book in the series, explains why stories 1/2 took place by going into the past.. and then the stories by going into the past, explain why 3 and 4 were pre-destined to take place.. talk about getting deep into shit

your one of those people??? WHY WOULDNT it just be book 1 is the beginning? hahahahah jk

[LeMans335xiE90]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

It technically goes

1
2
3
4
2.5

when was last time u saw a series end with the middle story? NEVER!! not star wars and everyhting else that goes into prequals

hmmm and you think it is good to be different then star wars??

[KyLu II]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

that is part of the chapter where jerry lends to use his mind to meditate his soul to another dimension, by doing this, he can fight the spirit within him to prevent its release.

Ill have some of what your smoking

[KyLu II]

Originally Posted by coldasicex5

It's always been jerry.. LOL well my real name isnt jerry, u know this!!


I could make my author name like.. GJ Gawel or JG Gawel.. something like that..


OGMOMOGMGMOGOGOG

Kumar Gawel

[LeMans335xiE90]

hahah nice... alright guys i am out catch you later!